I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
In Literacy, we chose a book from our group box and a buddy recorded us reading. We are using these as samples for our reporting through Hero. (Hero is the new Linc Ed). This is Connor sample:
Hey Hey, how about that. Well done Conner, didn't you do very well.Remember to look at the words. I could tell you were very excited,great reading young man.I am missing my wonderful helper (you) and I am looking forward to when we can catch up, when ever school returns. I hope you are helping mum out.Stay awesome.
Lovely to hear you reading that story Connor, you were very excited weren’t you? I’m looking forward to seeing you back at school and hearing more stories that you can read. Have you been practicing throwing hoops.? See you when we get back, stay safe and have fun
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Hey, how about that. Well done Conner, didn't you do very well.Remember to look at the words. I could tell you were very excited,great reading young man.I am missing my wonderful helper (you) and I am looking forward to when we can catch up, when ever school returns. I hope you are helping mum out.Stay awesome.
ReplyDeleteLovely to hear you reading that story Connor, you were very excited weren’t you? I’m looking forward to seeing you back at school and hearing more stories that you can read. Have you been practicing throwing hoops.? See you when we get back, stay safe and have fun
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