I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bonjour Connor it is Lacie here. I like your shout out to Mrs Duthie. This was a nice thought for you to give a shout out to Mrs Duthie. Just to let you know when you wrote"I'm happy that I wait out there for her" You forgot to add the r at the end of for.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Bonjour Connor it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your shout out to Mrs Duthie.
This was a nice thought for you to give a shout out to Mrs Duthie.
Just to let you know when you wrote"I'm happy that I wait out there for her"
You forgot to add the r at the end of for.